Sixteen, Part 2

Well, that took me considerably less time, perhaps because I actually dedicated most of my weekday evenings to this for the last 2 weeks.

This time, I didn't struggle so much with the dialogue, but I had to re-do the layout and pencils for a page because it apparently only made sense in my head, and not to anyone else. I'll include it at the very end of this post for comparison's sake.

Things that I was appreciative of:
- I'm really glad I spent the time that I did on character designs. I feel like I have a better grasp of executing the designs, and the costumes and styles of each character really helped them "pop" on the page. I was proud that I could look from a distance and still mostly be able to tell who was doing what.
- I should work more on cool "font" styles! It was lots of fun to do.

Anyway, here they are:


( And 5 more pages, plus discussion of struggles )